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Pat Mills's avatar

Thanks, John. I'm equally looking forward to writing the final draft. It's one of those subjects where the more I read about it, the more awful the conflict reveals itself. Thus I only just discovered the figures for deserting in World War One. Presumably Britain alone. Authoritative source, in fact a revisionist source (Western Front Association). Anyway... according to academic study, officially it was 146,000! Probably far higher if 'absent without leave' etc is included. That's a staggering figure. It suggests a very different war to the one we were presented with in the centenary years

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Pat Mills's avatar

Thanks, Daniel. Well observed. He needed to be charismatic and credible. Hence the gravediggers cottage. A kind of poor man's Bruce Wayne. I know that other writers for MI7 propaganda department hated what they were doing, so that gave me a basis for him. A.A. Milne, for instance - who later wrote Winnie the Pooh. So many characters in that era were colourful and larger than life - including Lord Dunsany and Captain Pollard, but they were always on the side of authority. Good to have someone who is challenging authority in a way that I don't recall seeing since the Callan tv series.

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Paul's avatar

There’s a good amount of depth here to get us really interested in what he’s done, why and at what cost to himself. As ‘well rounded’ a character as any assassin should be! Looking forward to the shorts be good to have some episodic once & done stories to compliment the novel.

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Daniel's avatar

It all seems like a good build up for the main character, Pat. Living in a grave digger's cottage sounds as if he's asking for trouble 😅

There isn't anything like reality (or ghosts) smacking you in the face to rid you of some of the previously held stupid notions of youth! I like how he's walked himself into a creative, financial and moral cul de sac before he's obliged to change.

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John McShane's avatar

This story is right up my street. WWl and the situation in Ireland. Your story will fulfill Horace's dictum that a story should teach as well as delight. Can't wait to read it.

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